tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post9117339562939546954..comments2023-08-26T08:19:53.299-04:00Comments on FCEtier, Photographer - Author: Faculty Club FlashbackFCEtierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01034125920155332301noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-88418073436572005872013-12-15T09:09:25.772-05:002013-12-15T09:09:25.772-05:00Thanks for this comment/inquiry.
It gave me the id...Thanks for this comment/inquiry.<br />It gave me the idea for a blog and it will run tomorrow on my publisher's website.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-48456760128633661912013-10-14T08:07:43.818-04:002013-10-14T08:07:43.818-04:00Oh interesting. Oh interesting. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-62873010427027010342013-10-13T22:01:26.125-04:002013-10-13T22:01:26.125-04:00She must be very good at disappearing. Interesting...She must be very good at disappearing. Interesting snippet, Frank. Just a suggestion, be very careful with flashbacks and backstory taking too much of the current action. Concentrate on the current story and let the past come through with dialog between the characters. It keeps it exciting. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-91867123762905395192013-10-13T21:18:36.991-04:002013-10-13T21:18:36.991-04:00Ah, fooled by her disguise. She's good.Ah, fooled by her disguise. She's good. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-26826766261528472482013-10-13T15:18:51.700-04:002013-10-13T15:18:51.700-04:00Kind of gave me a cold chill, how observant she is...Kind of gave me a cold chill, how observant she is and how good at disguises! I loved the excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-65076478373503391742013-10-13T12:20:15.416-04:002013-10-13T12:20:15.416-04:00Great use of the 8's, Chip! Their dialogue re...Great use of the 8's, Chip! Their dialogue reveals so much about him and his relationships with not only his wife, but his world. Well done!J. A. Hornbucklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17052929905955160076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-56674629962432715632013-10-13T12:16:14.889-04:002013-10-13T12:16:14.889-04:00I like Claudia... I can't wait to get to know ...I like Claudia... I can't wait to get to know her better!Hilaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00938287202761607041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-79476579080696072252013-10-13T09:45:53.360-04:002013-10-13T09:45:53.360-04:00I'm curious as to the subject of her thesis......I'm curious as to the subject of her thesis...PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-5908518400608002832013-10-13T08:58:20.512-04:002013-10-13T08:58:20.512-04:00Thanks for the comment, Gem.
You're close on e...Thanks for the comment, Gem.<br />You're close on every point!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-60392918402899184672013-10-13T08:56:29.436-04:002013-10-13T08:56:29.436-04:00There's a scene in the book in which she inter...There's a scene in the book in which she interviews street performers in NYC and another describing her skill as a makeup artist.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-79826967091585980942013-10-13T08:55:27.014-04:002013-10-13T08:55:27.014-04:00Thanks, Jess.
I appreciate your feedback.Thanks, Jess.<br />I appreciate your feedback.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-47072646115995646372013-10-13T08:54:50.915-04:002013-10-13T08:54:50.915-04:00He was fooled by her disguise. She had the ability...He was fooled by her disguise. She had the ability to pass herself off as a male. Have you ever seen that old movie with Julie Andrews, "Victor Victoria?" FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-13417085317698175542013-10-13T08:39:53.285-04:002013-10-13T08:39:53.285-04:00From this snippet, I deduced, he's dense and s...From this snippet, I deduced, he's dense and self absorbed, his student is advising him, his wife is unhappy with him, and Claudia enjoys "going under cover." I haven't been following this story so I might be off, but the dialogue as very well done. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-75047713815265566822013-10-13T08:39:19.009-04:002013-10-13T08:39:19.009-04:00Claudia is great. Snarky, scary-smart, and that i...Claudia is great. Snarky, scary-smart, and that intriguing tough of sociopathy to keep things even more interesting. :)Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-48580181440846996192013-10-13T08:38:45.214-04:002013-10-13T08:38:45.214-04:00I like your Claudia, and I love sociology.I like your Claudia, and I love sociology.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-16215733574030860072013-10-13T06:40:56.704-04:002013-10-13T06:40:56.704-04:00I'm always impressed by how organic and crisp ...I'm always impressed by how organic and crisp your dialogue is. Another great snippet!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-40480110794334898752013-10-13T02:32:25.326-04:002013-10-13T02:32:25.326-04:00Interesting little flashback. I like seeing how h...Interesting little flashback. I like seeing how her experiments helped with her future career : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-22406249280809364592013-10-13T01:04:04.105-04:002013-10-13T01:04:04.105-04:00Hum, it's very strange that he doesn't see...Hum, it's very strange that he doesn't seem to remember. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-2982388353549982082013-10-12T23:15:31.267-04:002013-10-12T23:15:31.267-04:00It's intriguing as to how aloof the advisor wa...It's intriguing as to how aloof the advisor was to her presence, whether just self absorbed or fooled by the disguise.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.com