tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post8806761504152108013..comments2023-08-26T08:19:53.299-04:00Comments on FCEtier, Photographer - Author: A hot Star gets hotter with every stepFCEtierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01034125920155332301noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-79789030472003483802013-04-28T20:26:23.120-04:002013-04-28T20:26:23.120-04:00Very sexy, especially with the photo you provided....Very sexy, especially with the photo you provided. :)Claire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-43734363943153734382013-04-28T18:48:48.672-04:002013-04-28T18:48:48.672-04:00Love the way she emerges from the cloud of steam. ...Love the way she emerges from the cloud of steam. So easy to picture from there! Nice sexy snippet!<br /><br />~Joyce ScarbroughThe Belle in Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16368021976814668783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-32486126370160788382013-04-28T16:16:15.206-04:002013-04-28T16:16:15.206-04:00Nice! Love the soggy trail. No one ever thinks of ...Nice! Love the soggy trail. No one ever thinks of that when they write getting out of the shower wet. The snippet's very seductive. Well done!<br /><br />Re: that POV switch (great catch!). If you break it with a paragraph break, you could use it as a smooth POV transition, no need for the scene break symbol. Virginia Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07475655537891648807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-17353027048433426362013-04-28T13:55:55.107-04:002013-04-28T13:55:55.107-04:00Chip, who knew you had it in you to write sexy, to...Chip, who knew you had it in you to write sexy, too??? Well done!Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-42790548828818068632013-04-28T13:39:37.148-04:002013-04-28T13:39:37.148-04:00Good eight, Frank. You switched POV in the last se...Good eight, Frank. You switched POV in the last sentence from him to her, so you might want to change "saw him lean in" to "and he leaned in" to keep it tight. Nicely done. Hot stuff. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-63099862379764675302013-04-28T13:24:29.721-04:002013-04-28T13:24:29.721-04:00Sensuous, wonderful descriptions...terrific snippe...Sensuous, wonderful descriptions...terrific snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-73751908108427555652013-04-28T12:12:18.344-04:002013-04-28T12:12:18.344-04:00Very evocative. Well done!Very evocative. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-85878566315172681222013-04-28T11:54:33.322-04:002013-04-28T11:54:33.322-04:00Fabulous descriptions. It was so easy for me to se...Fabulous descriptions. It was so easy for me to see this scene in my head. Well done.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-40200338288815716722013-04-28T11:47:56.842-04:002013-04-28T11:47:56.842-04:00Enjoyed your snipet!Enjoyed your snipet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-81322493140303490102013-04-28T08:54:10.811-04:002013-04-28T08:54:10.811-04:00Today must be the day for hotness. Same sorta thin...Today must be the day for hotness. Same sorta thing over at my blog today, Chip. LOL Love this visual you've created here. Super job!AJ Nuesthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010557416505335378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-76549554159354228002013-04-28T08:51:45.636-04:002013-04-28T08:51:45.636-04:00Very sensual scene! I'm interested to see wher...Very sensual scene! I'm interested to see where these two go. Thanks, Chip!Nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08809913527142033733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-41303703401221438702013-04-28T08:46:55.499-04:002013-04-28T08:46:55.499-04:00Excellent descriptions (whew---fans self)!Excellent descriptions (whew---fans self)!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-23911140164163645432013-04-28T08:38:29.231-04:002013-04-28T08:38:29.231-04:00Great imagery. Very steamy. ;)Great imagery. Very steamy. ;)Sharon Buchbinder, Romance Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02848087216042290453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-25874645929567595172013-04-28T08:12:30.745-04:002013-04-28T08:12:30.745-04:00Oh man, that is so sexy. Nothing hotter than a man...Oh man, that is so sexy. Nothing hotter than a man fisting his hand in your hair and pulling your head back to receive his kiss. I had a gentleman friend who...yikes, TMI. Very intriguing 8.India Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655550748159559852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-18091530650760227072013-04-28T07:38:06.727-04:002013-04-28T07:38:06.727-04:00grrr... getting juicier and juicier. I'm in, ...grrr... getting juicier and juicier. I'm in, what's next?Dog Brindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01873611813501487725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-27734604094214506822013-04-28T04:45:47.124-04:002013-04-28T04:45:47.124-04:00Wow, great descriptions in this snippet. Well done...Wow, great descriptions in this snippet. Well done, Chip!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-4908041867068683482013-04-27T19:01:57.886-04:002013-04-27T19:01:57.886-04:00Terrific image of her and really vivid description...Terrific image of her and really vivid description!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04556031831830621195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-60172169997132927342013-04-27T18:02:14.778-04:002013-04-27T18:02:14.778-04:00Thanks, Teresa.
One of my favorite scenes in the b...Thanks, Teresa.<br />One of my favorite scenes in the book.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-979123467107730191.post-7483257080275976872013-04-27T17:40:31.426-04:002013-04-27T17:40:31.426-04:00Wow! Wonderful description, Chip! :-) Good eight ...Wow! Wonderful description, Chip! :-) Good eight :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com